Shine your light
"In my darkness hour, when I feel weak.
shine a light, so I can find you.
through the forest where my fears live
past the shadows and my tears,
shine a your light and I will find you.
Shine your love".
Shine your light
Written by Trojan Gayle
© 2010 T.Gayle, all rights reserved
Happy New Year~~!!!............................................................
ReplyDeleteGood poem Ma.. I dont criticize poems im not any good at writing them but i try.
ReplyDeleteI will tell you that this poem should be read aloud. And not just by you. You should find someone, another student (or students) and take turns giving voice to the poem. Why? Because most poems are meant to be read aloud. They require you, the reader, to participate.
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